Wow. You've stunned me. I don't think I've seen imagery like that in awhile! That and your word use! THANK YOU! I just LOVE seeing words that aren't the norm, and some I've never seen before. I love it. I only have one question. What happened to Z? lol. But anyway, this is DEFINITELY a 5/5. I loved it.
Oh, and btw, I love rabbits too. xDD I actually had one that lived for ooh, 10 or 11 years. lol. Anyway, yeah. Loved the poem.
Wonderful!....what a winter wonderlandland of alphabetical delight!
So creative and different......love all the different aspects of nature that you have highlighted and featured. What amazes me is that you have kept the flow to perfection and the rhyme scheme is awesome....
"Squirrels scamper searching seeds
Terrifying trick or treaters tease
Uplands unearth in undue unease"
^awwww I love the little tricksters!.....you've captures their essence to perfection!
I thought this was brilliant and you have pulled off a difficult task. Wow you have woven quite a unique read here. It rhymed, tongue twisted, stayed on category of fall, managed to follow suit of alphabet..........I just can't say enough about the style and splendor of this beautiful verse you have created. Perfectly leaving off the Z. Made me think of the beautiful weather and that there is no better time to ZZzzzzzzzz. I love the fact you were not afraid to put in the filler words that didn't match the alphabet scheme. It took nothing away from the poem itself. Made it unique and your own. Brilliant darling.
I loved it.
Goodness! I don't know where to begin complimenting this amazing piece of poem.. The creativity that you inject in this poem is priceless.. I am amazed at the way you write this piece using the alphabets and with rhyming and creative combination of words... I adore every single line in this poem... Very unusual but utterly captivating...
Goodness! I don't know where to start comlimenting on this amazing write. The flow of creativity here flows so beautifully.. I am amazed by the way you write using alphabets combined with rhyming.. And I adore the imagination in your words..
Also, the way you play with words to create this poem is stunning... Great work! 5/5!
11 years ago
by Lets Keep it A Surprise
This was extremely brilliant and put a smile onto my face after a long day. The way each word twisted and knotted my tongue made it quite sore at the end, only to find out to my surprise there was still a second part!