Deathly goosebumps

by Joshua Grider   Nov 12, 2007

Have you ever felt there was nothing inside

Like death was hunching over your back
Breathing heavily over your head
But nothing was there.

the goosebumps on the back of your neck are caused by the cold fiery breath of the beast standing behind you.

you feel completly drained of life
as if you are dead already
and theres no reason to be left standing

Have you ever felt there was nothing inside
I have
it's death...


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  • 11 years ago

    by Scarlet Angel

    WOW... kinda creepy but very cool. definate 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    This is a really good poem i really enjoyed reading it. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by likethewind

    Wow. i really like it. great job. it was very... cold... for lack of a better word... i loved it. 5/5. great job. keep it up!

    yours always

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    I'm a deep Death poet myself! Keep up your writing! I love it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Disenchanted

    Very good poem, I could almost feel everything [That is if I wasn't already COLD x_x]

    I love free style poetry, too bad when I write freestyle I go into OCD and end up writing a story or making it Rhyme.