Comments : Christmas Memories...

  • 10 years ago

    by Shinobi

    A nice expression of feeling. You remember your brother in a family holiday. The memories are warm and nice... The structure and flow went great. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    Hey this really gave so chills!! it's great how you dedicated it to your bro! that is what made it sweet.
    do you mind if i ask what do you mean by he's living his other life now?
    pm me if you don't care to let me know!
    Great job! 5/5 awesome!!! =D

  • 10 years ago

    by ABake

    I loved the dedication in this peice. It was short but expressed deep emotion. I loved it all. Great job!
    5/5

    Amber...

  • 10 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow this is beautiful its very sweet, i love old memories when my family used to be whole, its great to have memories to hold onto great job! 5/5

    laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It must be hard around christmas time to be without him, especially when it's a time for family to be together. Your poem was very heartfelt and I can relate to the pain of missing a loved one. Great job 5/5 GG23

  • 9 years ago

    by kate

    This was really short but honestly it got to the point and was really sad in a way because you miss him :| but you did an amazing job though i enjoyed reading it and i hope everything is ok.

    keep up the good work. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 9 years ago

    by Blissful

    Aww I could just feel the saddness here and it made me emotional. Christmas is to be spent with the ones you love and when they arent there, Christmas does not feel the same. Well done *5/5*

  • 9 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Aww thats beautiful! i hope you can get to see your bro on christmas.

    ~shattered dreams~

  • 9 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwz short but says so much! great job....5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Abu3li

    A beautiful pieces expressing the pain of being apart from our dear ones

    good luck

    Her Guardian

  • 9 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Hmm, very short, but sweet, keep it up

  • 9 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was a short piece which expressed so much throughout your words. I found the dedication to be sweet and sinceree though very sad. It must be very hard to have christmas without your brother, I know i'd miss all of my brothers deeply if they weren't around for christmas. Well done with this. A nice poem. 5/5 ~Mel

  • 9 years ago

    by Cale

    I really liked this shows alot of ur emotion about ur memory of christmas!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Alex

    How precious, and sad. It was very pretty.

  • 9 years ago

    by Riley

    Short and sweet, and in season too!
    Nice expression, and a varying tone.
    I like that ;)

  • 9 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This poem was very thoughtful.
    Although he is gone,
    You know he will always be with you.
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Such a short lil poem, yet so deep and it says everything it needs to! well done! flows well too.

    Keep it up!

    Love
    Jacs
    xxx

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very well-written! The flow was beautiful, the word choice was good, and the concept was unique... 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This piece was short and simple but very beautifully written. This piece was very well written and very well thought out. Your choice of words were beautifully put into place. A heart felt read, amazing write. 5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's strange how as we get older the family and people we were closest to all those years start to grow apart from us. It gets down to phone calls and holidays and suddenly it's years inbetween conversations. I really enjoyed this piece because most people if not all can relate to the pain of thinking back to how it used to be. amazing job and great flow 5/5 GG23