Hey this really gave so chills!! it's great how you dedicated it to your bro! that is what made it sweet.
do you mind if i ask what do you mean by he's living his other life now?
pm me if you don't care to let me know!
Great job! 5/5 awesome!!! =D
It must be hard around christmas time to be without him, especially when it's a time for family to be together. Your poem was very heartfelt and I can relate to the pain of missing a loved one. Great job 5/5 GG23
This was a short piece which expressed so much throughout your words. I found the dedication to be sweet and sinceree though very sad. It must be very hard to have christmas without your brother, I know i'd miss all of my brothers deeply if they weren't around for christmas. Well done with this. A nice poem. 5/5 ~Mel
This piece was short and simple but very beautifully written. This piece was very well written and very well thought out. Your choice of words were beautifully put into place. A heart felt read, amazing write. 5/5.
It's strange how as we get older the family and people we were closest to all those years start to grow apart from us. It gets down to phone calls and holidays and suddenly it's years inbetween conversations. I really enjoyed this piece because most people if not all can relate to the pain of thinking back to how it used to be. amazing job and great flow 5/5 GG23