Moment

Great poem, idk why it was rated so low. The rhyming was great and so was the flow. I liked the words that you chose to use. 5/5

This poem is interesting
I liked it
I thought though ti should be longer
and the stanza lines need work
on syllabol count
I would enjoy it a lot more it it were extended
so think about it
4/5

Im not really sure what this is about...

but the rythm is really cool.

Cleverrrrrrrr. Great use of onomatopoeia and a fabbity fab structure. Confused me a little at first but then I re-read the title and was like "aaaahhhhh!" Very clever indeedy. 5/5

Em xXx

You suckkkk
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