Twinkle Twinkle Lots Of Stars

by Pete   Jan 8, 2008


As we gaze at the heavens
our little slice of the sky
pearls shining back at us
so true we cannot deny

Angelic twinkling diamonds
fill this beautiful view
lived so many lifetimes
still so clear and so new

Nights crystal studded blanket
that lays over this world
glance at a new section
a new landscape unfurls

The stars are a lifeline
for the brave and the bold
take a look for yourself
at the beauty they hold

These gems of the sky
shining brightly at night
these heavenly teardrops
bring us so much delight

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    Koolio liked this poem wicked mate 5/5 again!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Wow.. amazing..
    Your discription of the stars are is great!
    A very good imagery too.
    This was really a pleasure to read.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Hm, a bit different than the other 2 but i like that, tis a great poem, and a great story also, again flow tis flawless and so is the grammer, man u got skills, i give it another 5/5!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is breathtakingly beautiful from the beginning to the end. You managed to entwine greatly expressed emotions with superb descriptions. The imagery that you created is so vivid, truly fantastic. The flow of the whole piece is serene and truly flawless.
    My favorite stanza is:

    - Nights crystal studded blanket
    that lays over this world
    glance at a new section
    a new landscape unfurls-

    Wonderful read!
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Amazing! Beautiful! The title alone captured my attention, but the poem itself was, wow... stunning! I loved your choice of words, the flow, how neat and organized your work was. The entire poem is just perfect, darling! You did a great job, I bet many will be able to relate to this piece. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

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