You Said

by 0BrokenBella0   Jan 25, 2008


You said that time would ease my pain,
But I still hear the voice of death calling out my name.

You said that it would be all right,
But one day, I'll lose the fight.
I'll give up and one day I'll die.
And I want to hear that you won't cry.

No one knows the way I felt,
And won't understand. I gotta get out.
And if by chance tomorrow, I don't return,
Please live for me as the next suns shall burn.

You said if I killed myself, you'd die.
But know that I'd rather see you cry.
Please know that I won't leave you here.
Unless you promise you won't shed a tear.

And you can't kill yourself due to my pain.
And you can't sit and cry out in the rain.
Please don't ever leave me alone,
But to do this would send me home.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Amazing.

  • 9 years ago

    by Viola

    "Please don't ever leave me alone,
    But to do this would send me home."

    ^Those last two lines AMAZING, just amazing. This poem has such deep emoption in it. It brigns tears to my eyes. I know how hard it is to remain in this world when all you want to do is leave, but you just can't bear the pain you'll cause the ones you love. It's a hard situation. I hope you find a way to deal, and a way to live.
    Great poem! =]
    --Viola

  • 9 years ago

    by neo

    Your poems are helping me cope with my life. thank you. i am voting this into the contest......thanx

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