Awww.. it doesn't really look like a poem like wat you just said.. but still it has your emotions written into the words and that's wat it matters.. a heartfelt poem that tells the readers how in love you are right now... =] nice poem..

This poem is very sweet n it rlly does define wht love is. there r many other kinds of love but this is the sweet kind. i love it. keep up the good work 5/5

I enjoyed this poem alot, I found it to be elegant and sweet. One think I thought is you used truly too many times within the first 3 lines. I felt like I was repeating myself way too much. The flow of this was nice, I believe it to be smoothe. I found this poem to be quite beautiful, your meaning of this portrayed is touching really heartfelt and the topic is a touch cliche but all love poems are really. You actually pulled off writing a cliche poem nicely, you made it seem less cliche then most people would. Overall a stunning poem. 5/5 ~Mel

That was so a poem!!!!!! That was everything a poem should be, full of emotion and how you REALLY feel! That was so well done, and I loved every line.
5/5

Very poetic for a non-poe as you call it. It was wonderful, sweet and true. the emotions ran deep and it was a very pleasent read. poem or not it was a masterpiece and the flow was flawless 5/5

This is simply great. It is very amazing work. I love the way you express your emotion in this poem. I really love the forth and the fifth stanza. Well done job. 5/5

Cute. very inspiring poem. i would be proud to own that even if it didn't rhyme. 5/5 !props!

This was a pretty good poem. The spacing worked well for the storyline. I especially liked the last two lines and the repetitivity of "the one that". the first two lines are very good too. the detail is good and i like how you followed along, like when you said the one in your thoughts before bed and then in your dreams the next second. i give it a 5/5. <3

Aww this was just beautiful. The love you expressed here was truly something I could relate with. The emotions were so real and I could tell came straight from the heart. You descriptions were just flawless.

"The one that cirlces your
thoughts before bed

Then dances around
your dreams the next second"
^beautifully said.

*5/5*

Amazing. it is still a poem.
only thought is for this
"He makes your
heart speed up and"
i think you should take out the "and"
and i think you should change "he makes to "they make"
i think it just fits better with this if you do not specify the gender of "that one special person"

great write
5/5