Submission date : 2008-07-10
Mia ( C )
Really good. I like how you used your words.
kelleyana ( F P C D )
Onlywith time pain can heal. I like the way you expresses feelings and thoughts. Keep it up.
Teenage Romance ( F C D )
Wow. amazing as perusual. 5/5. i love your description and the rhyming was awesome. yet again i can relate ^_^ very raw and powerful poem. keep it up. ~KM~