Submission date : 2009-12-23
I Am Ready To Climb ( F P C D )
I am very sorry you feel this way, have hope and faith, you will find that in Christ, and don't be in despair.
My only suggestion for this poem would be to work on your grammar a bit by capitalizing your "i"s and making "cant" be "can't".
I thought this piece could have been extended or elaborated on, I felt like it was all brief, though very heartbreaking.
God bless you and Merry Christmas friend!
Samantha ( F )
Thanks but with grammer its hard on an ipod touch
and im not allowed out of my room i havnt been in3 days
All Angel No Wings ( F P C D )
Good work :)
i used to feel the same because my dad was/is abusive. i accually still feel that way.
but he isnt allowed to see me anymore.
good strong words :)