Always Missing You

by Heather Clark

As the days continue to pass
The feeling of missing you only gets stronger.
The tears only fall harder
and the pain continues to linger
my thoughts become more scattered
the nightmares become more real
And the emptiness only gets deeper
My heart stays on you
while this lonely life becomes less meaningful
And regardless of what goes on
all i can do is miss you
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Submission date : 2005-02-25

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Serenity the fallen ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-09

it's short of short but i liked reading it, you explain the feeling in this poem very well
nice work

Lisa ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-09

Such a sad poem,but I understand your feelings completely, I like the way you put feeling into the poem, although it does make me sad, lol..

Danielle at 2005-07-20

I felt it was very strong and emotional you're really good

Carmen ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-25

That was really sad. i understand it, i have the same situation. but, you need to place commas and periods in there to seperate your thoughts, because its kinda hard to read. 4/5

Ashley Patterson ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-25

Lovely poem. Well-written. No mistakes that I could see. 5/5



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