maryann at 2005-05-22

wowo this poem was so sad but dont kut ur self i used to think the same thing.i also cut myself four times but noticed self mutilation was not the answer.but someone will soon kome if u ever need a friend i will b able to help un talk to u.ur friend~*~**MARYANN~*~**

Karry at 2005-05-23

Hey..well i wrote a poem very simular to this one.and But the last line was "Thats when i rwalise.Im not the only lonely girl." hehe well its something like that.This poem was very emotional.Just like how i feel inside.Each time i cut myself.I know sayinh "hope things get betterR" wont really help.But did you write this poem because its from the heart?Or did you just write it from imagenations or w/e is around you that your seeing?I wrote mine personally because its how im feeling.Thidpoem really inspires me.Theres more to life.Think about your goal.I dont have anyone that could truely care about me. But school is what i think about most now.my top priority!anyways imma bounce take kare buh bye xox

Freak ( F C D ) at 2005-06-02

you had it then you lost it towards the middle but then up picked it up again at the very end. nicely written. try making the rhyming in the middle work maybe
~Freak~

matt ( F P C ) at 2005-09-04

That was a great poem im sorry for what has happened to you to like make you sad and cut but hey whatever gets you through life your really talented i loved it keep me coming

elihja reyes at 2008-02-18

This is so sad idk wat to say