Submission date : 2005-06-23
Katie Mahony ( F C )
This poem is absolutely fantastic. I think you did a wonderful job and this poem is definitely 5/5
Jacqui Armstrong ( F P C D )
Such an amazing poem =)
you are really good!
only one thing i could find was you put "riping me apart" i guess you mean ripping?
still such an amazing deep poem
keep up the work it will get you through hard times that you will be coming to =)
Lisa ( C )
I really like this one.