Submission date : 2006-09-22
Last edit : 2006-09-22
Your-Distraction ( F C D )
That was a very good poem!
(Sleep, pretty lady, you're free from that pain
As the garden twists, the wind howls your name)
This line was very well written your a good writter!
(Check out my poemz if you want, I like to know what people think)
Luanne ( F P C D )
Oh my dear Katie,
This poem touched me to the deepest of my heart . My gram passed away a little over a year ago and geez it is so hard to go to family functions and stuff and her just......not being there .
Such a heart-touching piece Katie, My heart is drenched in tears .
(((HUGS))) FOR YOU SWEET GIRL .
Much love, my friend
brittany ( F C D )
Wow great job
Sarah :) ( F P C )
This is a beautiful poem katie, it touched my heart truly and deeply
your grandmother is smiling down on you and showing off about what an amazing poet you are!
5/5 take care xxx
*Gem* ( F P C D )
I can really relate to this. My nan passed away two months ago, not even that yet and with Mothers day coming up tomorrow, things are hard
You're poem gave me a new strength.
If you can face difficult days like that, so can i
Thank you for writing this