Cursed Boy ( F C D ) at 2007-11-04

I hope one day i can be a father like that, and my daughter will write a poem like you.. ^^
This poem was so nice,,, I liked it,,, simple, but the flow was good... An enjoyable poem,,
Keep up the good work..
5/5

Miranda ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-04

Beautiful,emotional piece.A couple of times the wording seemed a bit off,but it was still good.I loved how you ended it,it closed it very well.A 5/5 from me.

Keep writing,
Miranda

Sam Mayo ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-04

*Cries uncontrolably*
*Stops*
sorry but it was so sad
this is realy different from what i am used to reading and i utterally enjoyed it
5
:~)Sam Mayo

mandy at 2008-01-18

This is very good poem becouse im daddys little girl until latly when he died

Jade ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-06

I loved how simple this poem was. I know you wanted us to read poems with little amount of votes... but I had to read this one. It was so sweet, so full of love and longing for what can not be. It was an amazing write