Daddy's little girl

by Kaila

Daddy's little girl,
Stands here so strong.
In daddy's eyes,
She's never wrong.

Daddy's little girl,
Always does what she's told.
She's the perfect little angel,
So he never has to scold.

Daddy's little girl,
Is as perfect as can be.
With her pink little dresses,
She's cute as can be!

Daddy's little girl,
Gets what she wants.
It's not diamonds,
It's the attention she's got.

Daddy's little girl,
Misses him so much.
That she would give anything,
Just for one last touch.

 

Submission date : 2007-04-01

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Cursed Boy ( F C D ) at 2007-11-04

I hope one day i can be a father like that, and my daughter will write a poem like you.. ^^
This poem was so nice,,, I liked it,,, simple, but the flow was good... An enjoyable poem,,
Keep up the good work..
5/5

Miranda ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-04

Beautiful,emotional piece.A couple of times the wording seemed a bit off,but it was still good.I loved how you ended it,it closed it very well.A 5/5 from me.

Keep writing,
Miranda

Sam Mayo ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-04

*Cries uncontrolably*
*Stops*
sorry but it was so sad
this is realy different from what i am used to reading and i utterally enjoyed it
5
:~)Sam Mayo

mandy at 2008-01-18

This is very good poem becouse im daddys little girl until latly when he died

Jade ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-06

I loved how simple this poem was. I know you wanted us to read poems with little amount of votes... but I had to read this one. It was so sweet, so full of love and longing for what can not be. It was an amazing write



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