A Bride To Be

by Meme

Trustworthy? If not you
then who could it ever be.
When your name holds
all the meanings of loyalty.

A friend to me? That's
just half of my reality.
You are no longer a friend,
you have became a family.

Seriously? You are getting
married, how can that be?
Just yesterday you were
a little girl climbing the tree.

A bride to be? Yes, very
soon, just count to three.
Don't hesitate dear, you are
starting to build a new family.

*Dedicated to my best friend who's getting married in a week.*

© Copyright 2012 by: gIrL


Submission date : 2012-02-18
Last edit : 2012-04-02

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Yakori Mohammed ( F P C D ) at 2012-02-18

This is such a lovely gift for a marriage. I hope she finds it as pleasing and beautifully crafted it is with the simple wordings but thought provoking. I love where you said, 'Just yersterday you were a little girl climbing trees'. It shows once upon a time bride-to-be, was a naive minor; now a mature lady in waiting, to tie the knots. Wishing them a life of eternal joy in their marital lives, Ameen ya rabbi. Jazakallahu Khairan. EXQUISITE! l.o.v.e. ;).

Lioness ( F P C D ) at 2012-02-19

People can grow up so fast right before your eyes. It happens but it's the beauty of life. I love this poem for its thoughts, and what it means. Awesome


tainted melody ( F P C D ) at 2012-03-30

This was very sweet and the 3rd stanza was my fav. it was simple and really pretty :)

tainted melody ( F P C D ) at 2012-04-27

This was extremely sweet and well written 5/5. It also had really nice flow and rhythem :)