Excellent work perfect flow felt a strong sense of emotion in it keep it up 5/5

That was a sweet poem!! the flow was nice and i want to know, were'd you come up with "charlie" the unicorn!! lol 5/5 !props!

This is amazingly written
i love imaginary in this poem

'And in my dream will jump upon a cloud
And hitch us a moonlit ride '

it's like a kaleidoscope (is it spelled this way? , lol)), so many sweet pictures, awwww

5/5

Wow! I loooove this one! It was so freaking good! The flow was great, and the emotions was good too. Great job!

Cayce xx

Well it was a great poem, I think to improve this you should add some punctuations in it, for me it really enhances a poem. And I think this poem should be written in past tense

This is only a suggestion.

Awww, another precious poem. I absolutely love it! This is my favorite of yours so far, your writing is just so mature and creative. The "dream" was so descriptive! 5/5

When I close to my eyes to sleep
Ill imagine you sleeping by my side
And in my dream will jump upon a cloud
And hitch us a moonlit ride

i like the way you started it,..so nice,

love it ^_^,.

That was so sweet i just loved it...5/5