Run Away Reflection

by HidinVictim   Feb 9, 2008


Run Away
Say Good-bye
To all the hurt,
And the Pain.
Who ever said she was sane?
Left alone
By the side of the road
Waiting to be slain
Tears, stain her face
A broken home
She tries to escape
Run away
Such a wild thing
Thoughts can not be tamed
A girl they tried to maim
Looking through the pain
A river running deep
Reflection, I see me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Amazing!
    I could feel the emotions coarsing through the words, it all seemed so real, so relatable. You painted a sad and lonely picture with your words, and portrayed the emotions nicely.

    5/5
    --Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by A l y s s a

    It has good material in it, but I sorta disagree with Pink Princess ^^^ I wouldn't say that the flow was great. It wasn't horrible but it was a bit off at some points. Your wording was great, and the title is eye-catching ;)

    Ally. x

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww thats really good, the flow is very good for it xxxxxxx

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