The Boy With The Green Eyes

by Andrew Santarita   Feb 9, 2008


There he stands all alone the cute boy with the green eyes
That s all anyone ever sees, but little does anyone know that's just a disguise
Behind those perfect green eyes lies thousand of tears waiting to be cried
No one knows that the smile he has on his face is fake
Everyone assumes that he's okay, but he really hates himself and just wants to die
He's been hurt by so many people in his lifetime
But he puts on a front that makes every believe he's fine
He's been in three different serious relationships and all end with the same results
A broken heart that he has to mend
No one seems to care that was until he met a certain someone
The cute girl with the brown eyes
They had so much in common it was unreal
They were perfect for each other but he didn't know that she wasn't for real
She was just playing games but he was to blind to see
He just wore his heart on his sleeve and he just wanted this to be
She made him cry and killed his self-a-steam
All that he thought was real was really just a cruel dream
Another heartbreak is what he suffered from and this time it would never heal the same
And the cute girl with the brown eyes was the one to blame
Now the cute boy with the green eyes is no longer alive and it's a damn shame
He died of a bruised heart and now everyone knows and now everyone is to blame
Everyone contributed to the death if someone would have just took the time out to be his friend
Maybe this wouldn't have been the end.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was such a sad poem. But very well written. I love the imagery. I think using that made this poem more like a poem. Clever idea. I also like the use of periodic syntax too. Keep it up hun. Nik

  • 15 years ago

    by Shannon Pyscotic

    This was an amazing poem. So emotional and powerful. It was amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Omg, I almost cried. The Emotion I felt was Strong. Honestly. The only work i think it needs is the editing of those boxes and giberish things...I get them alot...xD But once thats fixed, I Should be fine.

    Keep Writing. 5/5

    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I liked it but it could use some work