Man.. that was soo intense.. I almost cried because I know someone with the same problem..

The poem overall flowed nicely, but I really don't think anyone reading tat would worry about the flow. You did a good job telling a story through someone else's eyes, that's a hard thing to do. 5/5

Cayce xx

This is an extremely powerful and emotional poem. It was intense the whole way through, painting a very painful picture for the reader and I really did wince my way through it, know that even though to me, this seems so surreal, I know that this happens to families all over the world. It is a really heartbreaking piece, and you impacted me deeply. It is wonderfully written, not that that really would bother me because of such a serious storyline, you did an amazing job. Well done. 5/5

Tammie

I with all your other comments they said
just everything i was thinking while reading
this awesome piece I think you just made
me know what HELL feels like

Oh hunny, wow, VERY intense and very well written. it made me go all teary eyed. this is a really good example of how drugs effects everyone around ya not just yourself. but yeah 5/5 for sure, great flow and great message or atleast that's how I took it, my best friends step dad is addicted to the stuff. :(

When you said intense, I had to check this piece out to see if you were telling the truth. And truly you were. This was most definitly intense.
The emotions surged through the words, like an avalanche causing mast destruction- in this case destruction was sadness.
You held my attention from the very first word to the last, and still hold my thoughts sometime afterwards.
The flow was perfect and the word choice powerful.
The stroyline was heartbreaking, so very tradgic in its reality.
Im speechless, I really don't know what else to say...
This was a flawless write,
and an impressive read.
5/5 --Elaine

This is so stronge, written with such emotion

very word is on it's exactly place

without doubt it's 5/5

This was an intense, overwhelming, extreme, and powerful poem. Emotional and fierce to it's fullest potential. My eyes could not believe what it was reading.

I kept feeling the intensive wickedness of the drug infatuation your aunt felt.

I can not, it is practically unachievable to explain the deep internal sensation I got from reading it. The eerie uncomfortable feeling of chills swimming behind my spine.

This poem... flawless...

5/5

_[Deathly'Amore]

Wow...this is a very intense piece.... sorry that your aunt was stuck in that position... it must have been tough..

as for the poem..it was amazing..i enjoyed it...another favorite. =] 5/5

I like this poem, It's very well written. I like the emotions and the imagination it puts into your mind.
Thanks for you comment.
returning the favor. =)

I like to call these writings... "Poetic Writes" its more of a write than a poem. But altogether its just as beautiful. This had such a great story behind it... the length didn't even matter because it was so beautifully written. And deep... 5/5