Valentines day

by Marwa   Feb 10, 2008


Valentines day is here
and here i am alone in bed
you always told me that
you'll always will be there for me

but what happens now?
I'll commit suicide instead
and you will never be there
or bow...

when i die i want 2 tell you this
I'll love you and send you my love
from heaven
guess thats enough...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ruqayyah TG

    Short sad love poem, I really like it !!!

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    You don't have to die to be dead you already
    let someone suck he life out of you wake
    up and start over. life is for the living I
    know cause i've been dead a long time
    your poem is good excellent actually

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This was emotional poem. Written powerfully, load many other poems for us to see your remarkable work. I give you 5/5, you deserve it.

    Take care,

    Sarah A.

  • 16 years ago

    by I Rita Valentine I

    No! plz don't commit suicide u to wonderful of a poem writer to do so! great poem by the way me gived ya 5/5!!

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