As the night is still

"As the night falls once again
A girl lays here with many emotions in her
Stirred, and mixed together
Altogether jumbled with a huge confusion"

A truly entrancing way to open up this piece, grabbed the reader right away and for sure pulled them in. I like how you describe all that the girl is feeling.

"She tosses in frustration
She turns in irritation
Not one soul can deliver the spirit she needed
The heart that she holds must be too admirable to be cared for."

Excellent word choice, though this is saddening my heart already.

"The grief she carries within her very bosom
Is weighing her down day by day, night by night
In her dreams, she wanders until she can finally capture some warmth.
The night is still, from the over-flowing sea, a river is now streaming... "

Nice ending, leaving the reader satisfied. Nice work, keep writing, always and forever...

5/5 from me, great vivid visuals!

God Bless You And Your Family!