Take

by Amy   Feb 13, 2008


My whole world
has turned misty blue
my life has turned
upside down loving you

tears are falling
down my face
one after another
like it is a race

im clumsy
and falling all over the place

i dont trust anyone
not even my mother
but i do trust you
like no other

you are the air
within my lungs

i dont know what to do
i cant help but wait
i dont know how much more
i can take

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  • 15 years ago

    by Conrad

    I love the rhymes. Great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Biya

    Lovely , coz it has got rhythm , Good piece of work
    5/5
    Cheers
    Biya

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow there was so much emotion in this. It was great. i loved it.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    I really like this. This caught my eyes. So raw of reading this and you did great!

  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    I kno how you feel i'm feelin the same way wit someone
    really good poem
    well written

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