The flow was definitely flawless. :] I like this piece and the beginning was really good. The ending was good, too but i feel like it's too. .open ended, you know. [but thatz just my opinion] Anyway. great write. 5/5.

This is my FAVE poem!!!

love it abostly love it

5/5

Amazing gud flow

*tear*
+awwwies+
good poem
started out sad but ended happy,
i liked

You're right - I like your poems a lot. :] (This one in particular) The emotions were intense, the flow was flawless, and overall you did a pretty good job. 5.5 Keep writing.

-- Steph.

I really like this poem. :]] Haha, you were right. You have great style, but the flow was just a LITTLE awkward. But I loved it. You did a really great job.

Keep writing!
Cayce

This is a very amazing poem and I feel the pain and love in it and and I love it very much great work 5/5

Tammi,

I love this with a passion!
you are amazing (=

Wow this poem is soo sweet i love it

I really like this one. It's great.

Ooh,this is sooo cute.5/5

Ooh i like this one two its like both of you have only a half of you the other haf left and when you two are together you make a whole...this makes alot of since!

I really like this one 5/5 excellent

When you wrote this, were you thinking in someone ?

Awwwz wat a cute poem! but sad! lol but i rele liked it!!!

<3 i love you silly

This poem is so amazing! keep it up

I loved it. It really flowed beautifully. You should keep writing.

This is really good!!!!! i like the imagery!!!!! 5/5

I really liked this ! :)
Nice flow

OH THAT WAS SWEET!! -huggles the poem- great job!!