Whisper

by Lemma   Feb 14, 2008


Whisper my name in the dead of night,
Wrap your arms around me and hold me tight.
Give me your word that you'll never let go,
Kiss me softly and kiss me slow.
Look into my eyes and don't say a word,
Swear you'll never leave me without being heard.
Stroke my hair as I drift off to sleep,
Promise me this is one promise you'll keep.
Keep it safe and keep it true,
And whisper those words; "Honey I love you."

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem is really sweet, such a beautiful concept! I can't help but to feel as though this could've been written differently to make it more effective. The flow was ok, and the word choice was decent. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Leah20

    Similar to the other poem, I thought this was sweet, a nice poem between lovers, however nothing in it make me totally fall in love with it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Aw hun this is beautiful... i love it... i could picture every word in my mind... nice job. another 5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh I just loved this! It made me smile from beginning to end. I could truly feel the love here and everything was just so sweet! The flow was flawless and the scenes you created just blew me away. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I love this, it made me cry, it is so sweet!! I love your work, keep it up!!!

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