Inverted eyes

by NEWR   Feb 15, 2008


MY inverted eyes are on the rise

they ply and open life to the masses

it started with the english classes

where i noticed that in the literature

that life is just a caricature

and soon i became abstract by societies changing creature

i then adopted peace as my nature

As i nurture my knowledge

it'll someday change the world i promise

my message will be through me,you,or someone with the same dream

with the same objective and same inspiration from the same stream

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  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Good poem.

  • I like this very very good keep the great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    You're poetry is great but i honestly read half of it and i get completely lost, so i can only give it a 4/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    Rock on! Sort of a...autobiographical poem! The only thing I would say is that you rhyme scheme isn't uniform--but you may have written in that way for effect. Just something to think about!

    Party on!

    Toni

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