by NEWR Feb 15, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
MY inverted eyes are on the rise |
by J u l e s
Good poem. |
I like this very very good keep the great work |
You're poetry is great but i honestly read half of it and i get completely lost, so i can only give it a 4/5. |
Rock on! Sort of a...autobiographical poem! The only thing I would say is that you rhyme scheme isn't uniform--but you may have written in that way for effect. Just something to think about! |