I Hide My Face Today

by :( sydney ):   May 18, 2004


I hide my face today,
because I don't want you to see my stained face.
I hide my face today,
because I don't want you to see me cry.
I hide my face today,
because I don't want you to see me sad.
I hide my face today,
because I don't want you to see me, as me.
Maybe someday I will let you see,
the real me.
But only if you promise to understand,
who the real me is.
I don't want to lose you.
So until then,
I will hide my face,
from all that don't understand.

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  • 19 years ago

    by David

    Please don't confuse constructive critisism with rudeness Nae Nae. That's what this comments section is for. Luke is just being helpful and frank, and he is entitled to his opinion. :)

    Syd knee: I found that it has a lot of I's and me's as well. It is not my intention to offend, just to help. I could use condtructive critisism like this on my poems. Overall the poem, theme, and message are excellent.
    Continue writing and taking in true critisism, and you will go far .
    Remember, its just someones opinion, you and only you have to decide whether your work is just right or not.
    -Peace

  • 19 years ago

    by Nae

    its her poem.. it can have as many i's and me's as she wants.

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