To weak
by Matt L Feb 17, 2008
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To be a man one must be strong |
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17 years ago
by Goodbye
"To be a man one must be strong
In mind, in body, in soul
Therefore I am not a man"
=>very excellent words, I like!!
A mind cracked
Roots of weeds holding me breaking me
Sane madness consumes life
Forever starving
=>I like this structure you use
"Less than man more than human
An savage in a civilized body
Trapped and tormented
Freedom bound in rags"
=> This is really brilliant
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17 years ago
by Kate Hicks
Interesting. there is a lot of dipair here. Very good.
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17 years ago
by Dani
Haha supp matt!
love the poem :D awesome stuff!
and 4 that ill even rate you!
haha where would u be without me!:P
