To weak

"To be a man one must be strong
In mind, in body, in soul
Therefore I am not a man"
=>very excellent words, I like!!

A mind cracked
Roots of weeds holding me breaking me
Sane madness consumes life
Forever starving
=>I like this structure you use

"Less than man more than human
An savage in a civilized body
Trapped and tormented
Freedom bound in rags"
=> This is really brilliant

Well done...well done..

Interesting. there is a lot of dipair here. Very good.

Haha supp matt!

love the poem :D awesome stuff!
and 4 that ill even rate you!
haha where would u be without me!:P