ShootDrinkSmokeCut

by Nandiix3   Feb 18, 2008


Shoot it up day after day.
I hope you feel relief.
Because as you screw up your life.
Your also screwing up me.

Drink it down all day long.
I hope it numbs your mind.
Because as the alcohol settles,
Your slowly killing yourself.

Smoke it up every five hours.
I hope it doesn't make her cry.
Because one day your going to smoke so much.
And compeltely mess up your life.

Cut your wrists, don't go to deep.
I hope you can handle this physical pain.
Because one day your going to go to deep.
And then you'll be under six feet.

Do you honestly feel guilty now?
I hope deep down inside that you do.
Because maybe when you learn who you hurt.
You'll eventually stop hurting yourself.

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  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    This write is excellent...deep and true...5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Loved it keep writing.... just poetry

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Hmm.. interesting piece , this

    i like how you used the title..
    nice work.

    the message was pretty clear and i could'nt agree more to it.

    a very nice piece this.

    ~Wake~