What happened?

by StandStill   Feb 19, 2008


I used to look in your eyes
and i'd see something
fresh
new
alive

now i look in your eyes
and i see something
scared
young
ungrasping

i used to hold your hand
and i would feel
electrical
beautiful
loved

now i hold your hand
and i feel
well,
i wouldn't know
i haven't held it in a while

i used to lean back on you
and i would feel
you
strong
there

now i lean back on you
and i feel
you
a ghost
away from me

i used to tell you all things
and i would say
i love you
i care
i dare

now i tell you nothing
because you won't even talk to me

alright, so this doesn't follow an amazing pattern or anything, but lemme know what you think....xoxox

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  • 16 years ago

    by ~*GrEeN EyEz*~

    I REALLy LikED iT.. NiCE P0EMz.. THANx F0R y0UR C0MMENT ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Eman D

    It was unique. The three words after the stanzas put a nice rhythem to it. 5/5.

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