Gainned Pain (Various)

by XJulesX   May 19, 2004


Within each heart beat there is a pain.
For every swallow the pain will gain.
My mind was going sane to insane,
for each cut I make over one vein.
My life's slate is blank and plain.
My brain is twisted like a candy cane.

I wish no one even knew my name.
With each foot step the pain still came.
My life plays itself as it's own video game.
With each move my body makes, the pain is still the same.
Just let my picture fade in the frame.

It's like self abusing.
Who knows what path I'm choosing.

I'll just sit hear, let the pain past.
So each heart beat will slow, the swallows of pain will end, my mind will stay sane forever last.

Just never let the pain gain.

The pain is gaining,
it's so self wearing,
my heart is tearing,
the end is nearing,
my moves are daring,
the scars are healing.

I don't want the pain anymore.

Just never let the pain gain.

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  • 21 years ago

    by East Poetry

    The first two paragraphs are absolute master pieces, each with a very nice ryhme, and ryhme scheme. they also have a very strong ending sentence, witch is really cool. but in the second paragraph id shorten this sentence:

    with each move my body makes, the pain is still the same

    To:

    With every move, my pain remains the same

    I know you may have worked hard on the last half of this poem, but i would do away with it (not saying its bad) and write another 6 line piece and add it in some where, that way the whole poem will all be in the same ryhme scheme. just a suggestion. but like i said those top two paragraphs are exceptional. thx for the good read.

  • 21 years ago

    by Outlaw Central

    Thats good.
    Keep it up. It seems like my stlye of writing.
    To me it has a very musical/song feel to it though.

    I really like the wording you have used in this piece

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