by Roxy   Feb 21, 2008

[boy's point of view]

I can hear your voice echoing,I can hear your cries.
Looking around confused as you dry your watering eyes.
Opening new doors in hopes of finding something new.
Valley's of darkness begin to move in,surrounding you.
Evening is coming,demons are now beginning to awake.
You don't notice me,this is why my hearts is to break.
Out from under my feelings the words came through.
Under all the pain I confessed that I truly love you.

[girls point of view]

I know you can hear me,I'm calling out your name.
Loving you isn't at all easy I wish you felt the same.
Out come my tears,they mainly fall all because of you.
Voluntary I scream,I still have no clue on what to do.
Everyday is the same you always come to my mind.
Yet I can't help but wonder "You will I ever find?"
Only now I relaise that your feelings for me were true.
Under all the pain I confessed that I love you....


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  • 13 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    A very clever poem i must say, unique in that you show two perspectives , nice.
    Well written I like the contasting yet similar meanings of the two stanzas , very interesting


  • 13 years ago

    by Faithless

    Interesting style u created here...i got tot of doin something like this too but alwayz lost for words...maybe this poems will be my inspiration for my next poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    Really likes how you did two different point of views!
    Nice poem :]

  • 13 years ago

    by babyPB

    Loving the flow of the poem 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by JEFF

    Totally different from what I'm use to, but Wonderfully writen. 5/5