by Marius Laun Feb 23, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Thou shalt not defy me |
by Sumit Ojha
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Excellent... |
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Your rhyming scheme was funky but I felt it was pretty good. I enjoyed the word use. Not your best but it certinly interested me. The title is good too. |
by Amber
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I really like this poem. It flows very nicely, and has alot of meaning....I love how you chose to speak proper, it makes your words so meaningful...Great job. |