Awww...i could feel the emotions in this poem....its very good. ilove it. good job kortney.

Kyle Bleeding <3

Definitely a good poem full of emotions. every daddy's little girl needs her daddy.

Oh,sorry about the situation, it isn't fair, but well written poem

Omg it was so... emotional

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Emotional and powerful
keep up the good writing
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Very sad, so much emotion...

I"m definitely going to cry, This is amazin...

Im srry about your mom...
i can kinda relate to this in away..
my dads never here..in fact he aint here
i havent been with my mom in over 8 years she says she loves me...i love her to i guess...i dont hardly know her...i cant love someone that didnt care..
5/5
love this poem

You have a nack of making the reader feel
your words thats talent

For a start, I'm sorry that this has happened to you. I know how it feels for you to want your dad to take care of you.
You have expressed many emotions in a beautiful way. I hope you continue to write your emotions about this as the worst thing is to keep it in, locked up.
PM me anytime if you want to talk. I know what your going through, literally.

Very sweet and from the heart, i feel for you really i do,