Drifting
by heather May 19, 2004
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As I lye here staring into your eyes i long to feel the touch of your hand on my face i long to feel the touch of your lips on mine. You keep telling me that you love me but yet i am still holding on. Every time I ask you whats wrong you say nothing and walk away. How much longer do i have to wait. I wish you would talk to me cause we are slowly drifting apart. Just open up to me. Show me that you love me. I miss you so much. |
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19 years ago
by heather
ok thanks for the help. i will do better next time.
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19 years ago
by David
Nice work. You have potential.
The words anbd theme were great.
Your style is alright, but in my opinion, it needs some spacing. Your poems has to have flow, a body. It's for the benefit of the reader.
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19 years ago
by ~* Joyful *~
hey nice poem.. i thought it was pretty good.. i just found it hard to read because it was just like a paragraph.. i find it hard reading them poems.. other then that is was really kewl.. i liked it heaps.. good job
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19 years ago
by heather
np i dont like ppl being sad
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19 years ago
by East Poetry
keep up the good work on all your poems. thanks for reading my poems I appreciate it
