Awesome poem!! one correction though...instead of saying "threw" write "through" cuz thats how its correctly spelled. =) other than that its a wonderful poem. ilove it. great job!! 5/5

Nice poem indeed, I enjoyed reading it!

I Liked this one..hahahha..finally we both agreed on one thing...Life is like an empty dream...and its up to you how u fullfill it..

This is so true...I wish wt you do ....but some people never see that...I like it alot...you are very good....