Into The Abyss

by shelby lynne   Feb 24, 2008


Swirling thoughts around me
Breathe in, breathe out
Lungs filled with blood
Cant even shout

Falling tears around me
Inhale, Exhale
Mouth Is glued closed
She turns pale

Screaming voices around me
In out, In out
Knees begin to shake
Make this count

People running around me
Deeper now, Slower now
Sweat drips off
Cant see how

Hands beating around me
Out in, Out in
Fall to the ground
When to begin?

Another gun around me
Slow breath, fast breath
Shaking uncontrolably
So close to death

All around me
Breathing
Body
Die

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Really pay attention to the poem you guys
Fall into the abyss
And imagine it
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  • 15 years ago

    by she

    A truelly good poem, i could picture the scene- as said abouve
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Em

    Nice poem,
    And if it isn't too much trouble, mind checking out mine?
    xD

  • 16 years ago

    by yourheartx3

    I was able to clearly picture the abyss
    i loved the poem!!!!
    it was amazing =]