My Private War

by BrokenHunni   Feb 24, 2008


It used to be so perfect,
Just living here with you
Now i can't seem how to see
A way to make it through

Let me show you, just take me hand
Your fighting, its just like a war
Nobody can understand,
What it is that you're fighting for

Step back now, see through my eyes,
You've torn it all apart
Once we were one, now we are four
Tell me its not breaking your hearts

Where can we go from here
Is this pain easy to heal
I know that its not just down to you
But this we need to reconcile.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was so good!. I love the tiltle that really made me want to read this and boy did you write a masterpiece. This is just overflowing with deep emotions. I think you did a wonderful job with this. Very sad and heartbreaking, but beautifully written. Nik