I enjoy reading this. This is type of poem I never read so far and you did GREAT With this. You're AmAzInG!

THIS ONE IS REALLY GOOD!!!
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I like it alot!!!..i agree, u r amazing....xoxo

Aww; This is a gorgeous poem </3
There are bits where it seems you forced a rhyme to continue the flow of the poem; But I spose most writers do that occasoinally;

5/5