Nice one i love it

I loved it alot very good imagery and emotions

Thats so sad..people with disabilities are often made fun of. people like that should be punished. i hate labels too. as did this girl in you story/poem. good job finding words to rhyme. it makes the poem flow better. the structure was amazing. i could tell where you were coming from. 5/5 !props!

"Because she cannot walk,
And the words she cannot speak,
And because she is so silent,
They labeled her a "freak" idk if this girl is a real thing or not but this is a sad poem and you did a wonderful with it 5/5

So sad it's true. so many people today are judged and poeple don't care about rumors that they spread. you don't know what's going an in somebodies life right now so leave them alone.
Thank you for the read
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Little long... But really excellent... keep up this good work :)

This was a great poem. In the beginning it was a little rocky, the rhythm was a little off, but as it progressed on, I really enjoyed the poem. Great collaboration 5/5

Huh!
Fair poem...

This is such a great poem. Good rhyming adn flow. You're a great poet!

Treasure is usually hidden for those who explore.

Hey very beautiful poem... very touching..

It speaks volumes about taking the time to get to know the real person before passing judgment.

This is really good. :)

This is one of the best collab's I've ever read... Great write from both of you! The flow was amazing, the word choice was great, and the concept was brilliant! Very great job, 5/5!

Wow!! Those are the words that completely came out of my mouth when I finished reading this. I absolutely loved this poem. It had so much feeling in it. The words you chose was absolutely amazing. I hate when people judge everyone just because they way they look. It dusgusts me and I hate it so much. I loved your poem. This will definately go in my favs. Very good job!! 5/5 <---wish I could give it more since it deserves it.

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The truth behind this poem was filled with such meaning and power which made it great to read. Its so heartbreaking to know how many people are judged by their clothing or the way they speak because they do not fit in with the norm. They dont take the time to get to know this person yet they talk as if they know them. You spoke of something we all see in school and its so sad to see. Well done you two. *5/5*