Comments : Unheard Screams

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I know from where its coming and though i feel bad but at the same time am glad that you atleast released.
    very nicely written dear and every word express PAIN that you go through everyday.
    prayers and pain...both are heard if you keep your faith.

    all the best and take care dear

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Cindy,

    The poem is beautiful in all it's sadness.
    I am so glad for you that you have found a way to express your pain.

    *hugs you tight*

    Love,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by June

    Sad and heart touching yet so beautifully done.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    I feel your pain dear friend and wish upon every star that I could take it away hun.
    It saddens me to not only read the sadness in your words but hear the pain in your voice also.
    Many thoughts and prayers for you my dear friend
    Love ya
    Luanne

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Cindy...hope you are soon well and the pain subsides...I love you! Nicely written poem....can feel your pain and misery in your lines....

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    A sad reality, it speaks volumes. Excellent job on the poem, I wish I could take away your pain. I love you Aunt Cindy!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by J Avery Johnson

    PUTS ME IN THE MIND OF ONE OF MY WRITES: "UNHEARD CRIES" OR ANOTHER "SILENT CRIES".

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Congrats Cindy on the contest win!!!! Well derserved!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by ilu

    Godd job!!!...great emotion in it!!!..keep on writing..!!!5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Wow that was simply amazing! :) I have no idea why some people didn't vote it as a 5/5. There are no flaws in this poem, well done :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Blackstar

    Sad but really great !
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Gooberz

    This to me is what someone thinks before they write a sad poem, ive always been trying to write something close to this but it never works out, i really enjoyed this piece quite sad though nice job 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Cindy dear,
    first of all, congrat for the top three...

    This was beautiful sad penned you portrait here, beautiful sad written, yet you touch the heart reader, be sure take good care of yourself, i'll comes again soon. hugs!

    Bert

  • 11 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Gr8 poem cindy
    very sad but it touched my hart
    love ur work

    xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Omg this is so emotional... thats exactly how I feel sometimes

  • 11 years ago

    by xoxoRoseyxoxo

    I love ur poems so much

  • 11 years ago

    by blind soul

    Well that was really good! i love then end of it the last part it was really good! good job!

  • 11 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    That was expressed well...
    <3 I loved it.
    =]

  • 11 years ago

    by XxBR0K3NxX

    VERY NiiCE! ii LOVED iiT.
    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

  • 11 years ago

    by shannon

    I like this one..
    very sad..
    but very good!!!
    <3