by Sarah Feb 28, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Confused and lost he is |
by Krista
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I said I love |
by trippetta TC
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Love it the mythology of the raven as magic, lost is flawless |
by Tom Swart
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May your raven come today. I enjoyed it but do agree the ryhming may need to be adjusted a bit. I like it though. peace |
by Edward D Zurovec
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A very sad, yet heartwarming write. I'm reminded of an Old adage, "Eat more chicken, less crow." I thought this was a beautiful Poem. Peace and Blessings |
by Nix
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Rhyming isn't always necessary, rhymes often ruin the atmosphere of the poem, and in this one I think that rhyming was quite forced which left a negative impression on me. |