Wheres My Fairytale?

You have a crazyy style that i've never seen before. i like it though. it's good.

but in response to "broken hands", i think the title is fine because that's exactly what the poem is about. Title = couple word description of whatever (poem, story, etc.)
thats exactly what it is.

anyways. crazy good poem. i like it. =)

I know u feel =, (.....it really cute...5/5

This is soo cute

I like it!

It's ok, needs puncuation. The flow is good as well as the structure. Emotion within is shown very good, but I feel it is a very Cliche write (sp?) Overall it's just ok, could be better.

Peace, Joe