Losin my mind
by ima b anonymous Mar 4, 2008
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Why wont u talk to me why are u ignoring me i love u baby why wont u answer the phone when i call you i need you ur always pushing me away when ur goin through something bt when i go through something i dnt push u away at all ur havin my baby and i kno thats kinda big for me cus thats my first child ever so yea |
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16 years ago
This is a really great start kiddo, but you could do SOOO much more with it. Use your writing talent to really put all those horrible emotions that you are feeling on the page. Write them out, but give them art and beauty, instead of a flat rant. This could really go somewhere if you work on it a bit. Keep going.
