OMG that was sooo freakin deep. I loved the emotion you portrayed throughout this well written piece. Keep up the great job. Loved it 5/5 buddy!!!!

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You're very good at poetically writing. This piece showed a lot of emotion. And it was written wonderfully! Great write! 5/5

Great job, the emotions in it showed clearly and were awsom, keep it up.5/5

This is a very touching love poem, very real and personal as the title suggest

This poem was sort of not put together well
You might want to try a little bit of a structure
I think the poem would be a smoother read and alot more people would be interested
The message was okay it wasn't bad
try for more emotion
3/5

I think this poem is good
Well done keep up the work

Danielle
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