The Candle (Hot and Black)

by Jessica   Mar 7, 2008


The fire melts the candle wax
The glossy stick, hot and black
Liquid wax drips down the candle
Alluring flame, I can not handle
Little candle, friend of mine
Lovely candle, you are divine
I pour the wax onto my skin
And the great burning sensation begins
The black candle gives me power
Burns my flesh, my blood so sour
I love the flame, the candle wax
The glossy stick, hot and black

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    The words you used were so powerful and every line kept me reading! You were very descriptive in this, just like you are in your other poems! Take Care!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Enchanting!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Huh... really dark in Candle light...
    I mean that it's a nice poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The imagery here was just great and I could imagine everything nicely in my mind. Well done *5/5*

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