The Kingdom and The Raven

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Mar 7, 2008


Darkness closes
Slowly engulfs
Remaining beams of light
That slither through the dusty windows
Heart is beating
No
Heart is pounding
..............Thundering
...................Crashing
.......................Booming loudly
Light is dimming
Death is near
Heart now screaming
Have no fear
The grass is greener
On the other side
Lungs start closing
Paralyzed
Feel insane
Angel of death
Kiss you gently
You won't wake
Til this raven
Takes you to
The next kingdom
Your eternal domain

I KNOW!!!! i didnt rhyme. i love this poem tho so please comment. and gabby put a bad thing. please!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    You seem to have quite the gift for poetry. You are able to take emotions, give them words and definitions, and place them in just the right order, but in a different order every time, and remain consistent in the fact that the poems remain powerful AND properly executed.

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Oh, i don't think it's bad at all, it's really nice!
    5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Rhyming doesn't matter I LOVE IT!!!! 5/5
    XOXO
    ~me~

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Jk
    i LOVED this. jesse, they don't have to rhyme. i saw the image. i can't help it if i love ur work

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    This is the worst poem i have ever read.

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