Bloodlines

by FountainsOfBlood   Mar 7, 2008


A shiny star
In the dead of night
A razorblade
Comes out tonight

A twist and turn
A fatal slice
Another cut
Roll of the dice

A minor section
Of a horror crash
A major scene
With every lash

Blood is running
Feeling scared
My fragile body
Was unprepared

I fall so sweetly
To a rosy floor
If only things
Were like before...

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  • 16 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Wonderful poem... :D I liked this. It wuz amazing. So full of emotion, and it wuz deep. :D good job. 5/5

    --**Skye~
    (ima friends wit Courtney, whom i call Rose, and u call Miss.Bunny, haha she wuz talkin about u and i thought id check out ur poetry. She wuz right, u r very good ^^)

    -Comment some of mine! Thanks~ Hope to beh friends! :D-

  • 16 years ago

    by Kitsuneko

    I loved it. Freaking awesome rhyming and meter. Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Ok i am going to going you miss elf!! O.o lol

    Ok now miss ELF you are more than just a beautiful touch of a human, you have such a wonderful touch of poetry. Me like this one like alot great job ^_^

    Me going to go look at more poetry :) *cough cough* yours :P

    CourtneyxHolland

    T/C

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