Are You This Petal?

by last_petal   Mar 7, 2008


A petal that has been flown
The wind that carried thousands of her
In a place of nowhere
Blooming of her
Fascinates everyone to bear
How could it be?
Everyone tends to know a petal
They say it wihin colorsd
when a petal is red, a love lies within
Blue, sadness can be found
White, purity is her
Pink, blooming had shown
But how can they judge freely
Does anyone know this petal
A petal full of thoughts
Covered by fears
No one knows
Not the one always beside her
Not the trees she had been leaning on
It is only her
A petal that tends to fall
But stood up
As if it everyday was spring
Hides herself
when she's been running out of sap
She is not rose
With thorns
A petal that's not seductive
but can put smiles under the sun
Want to know her?
Look at yourself
Then, think are you this petal..?

P.S.
This poem will be revise again.. Hope you would like it?
If you are a male just make the her and she to him and he...
tnx...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Thnx I
    needed
    that it
    was a
    well
    written
    poem
    and I'm
    impressed
    don't forget
    to revise
    otherwise
    this might
    be longer
    thanks
    for the
    read
    ^.^