Awesome poem:] It flows nicely and the emotion in itis definetly plausable.Keep it up.5/5

Good, I like how all of your rhymes made sense. Some people just put rhymes in, to have rhymes you know what i mean?
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Great flow,intriguing write

I love it it is so dark i love it. i love the rymeing in this poem and i love how it flows!!!! your a great poet 5/5

Um. I kinda don't see where you are coming from or what your thoughts are about the topic. The topic is kinda vague. It's not a bad poem, it's just that I would like it if you explained to me your reasoning behind this poem.

It reminds my of wat id like to do to my x

Your poems are so emotional i love them!
xox

I really like this poem of yours casey.

..so dramatic..love this!:) 5/5..

Flawless and beautiful

This is a pretty good poem. some of the rhyming seemed a little forced though. I mean it rhymed, but it seemed like the way the sentence was structure was just so it could rhyme on some of the lines. I got the overall poem, but there were pieces that were confusing or vague. I really did like the descriptions though. They were easy to picture like the blood and gore it went very nicely with the line about war and that is an image easy to recognize. I might not make any sense, but hopefully you'll understand what I meant. I give you a 4/5. it's a good poem, but i think you show potential that you could make it great.

This is really , really good, it sounds a bit more simple then some of your other poems but thats what makes it diffrent . Great one. X