Poem of Secrecy

by Logan Rudolph   May 21, 2004


Someday I will look into your eyes
And know its time to say my good-byes,
Remembering all the fun times we had
And feeling the heartache making me sad
Hopeing someday my heart will mend

I knew eventually that this would end.

Love cuts through me like a knife,

You were supposed to be the center of my life.

take the first uppercase letter of the first 5 lines and the first word of the last 3 lines and put them together to hear my secret message

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany

    Wow! Thats soo deep!

  • 19 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    I thought the secret message was awesome. I got a little confused about it at first, heh but that's just cuz I'm a ditz... :)

  • 19 years ago

    by LostInLife!

    hey great poem i think it's kinda sweet how u put in a secret message
    jemma xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by patricia

    that was so good i luved it n i lyk how u do the message thing i think thats so cute n lyk i said b4 i luved it good work

  • 19 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Nice, i like how you use your poems to spell something, thats very origanal
    Thx for voting on my poem An angels touch, i did take your advise and changed that one word you suggested.
    that word has been changed a couple of times and your rigtht 'can' is the best choice, i gave you praise for the suggestion. I wrote another poem about Voteing, on this websight, its pretty cool. check it out when you get a chance. thx again

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